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TBOS Audition: The End by SaffyLailo TBOS Audition: The End by SaffyLailo

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Confusingly titled audition round ahoy!

Thanks to Betas

and also to Jezebellydancer and GSPCrocks who also took a look at things for me. You all helped loads and the entry is much much stronger for it.

I'd like to apologise for the judges for writing an audition round that is this long! I doubt the rounds will be any longer if that helps (it probably doesn't) but there was a reason I wanted to get this done early so people had plenty of time for it.

I recommend reading his with your PDF viewer set to "two pages" so it looks as much like a book as possible if anyone can turn into flash that lets you turn the pages like a book that'd be AWESOME :D

I really hope I get in now. *Crosses fingers*
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uvnote May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^^; I am STILL feeling a small vestige of sadness that you will be writing in TBOS's world, not your own, but an excellent audition nonetheless. :D I look forward to reading more about Sian! :D
SaffyLailo May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :D I intend to try and bring in some more info in her world and weave it into the story, like the hints as to how her world has been affected in this audition, when I go through other rounds but obviously I can't afford to crowd out the current plot tooo much.
FJTrickster58 Apr 26, 2011
That was a very entertaining read. You can really get a feel for and understand your character through it. Best of luck to you!
SaffyLailo Apr 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it. Good luck to you I shall have to read your entry soon :)
FJTrickster58 Apr 27, 2011
I warn you mine's long. but thank you.
TheBuggiest Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh, glad to see you've gotten yours in!
SaffyLailo Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I'm looking forward to this now and waiting impatiently for May to see if I've got in :D
tweedandtea Mar 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I'm joining you in the impatient waiting.
TheBuggiest Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm looking forward to it too. :)
DarthVengeance0325 Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"He was all she had left - sometimes she wished she could just
shrink him down and put him in her pocket to keep him safe, but that was, she knew, totally

LOVELY big sisterly imagery. :D Very impractical for a fighter. >_> Clothing is the most likely thing to be hit in melee or ranged combat; placing a valuable object in the way of the Dread Lord isn't smart. |D NOT that I took her seriously, mind you. :giggle: :3

Wonderful story, and I'm greatly envious of your abilities in writing and in art. ;3 But good luck, my friend. ^_^ You'd be a fuuun entry to follow. <3
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