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Thanks to Betas
and also to Jezebellydancer and GSPCrocks who also took a look at things for me. You all helped loads and the entry is much much stronger for it.
I'd like to apologise for the judges for writing an audition round that is this long! I doubt the rounds will be any longer if that helps (it probably doesn't) but there was a reason I wanted to get this done early so people had plenty of time for it.
I recommend reading his with your PDF viewer set to "two pages" so it looks as much like a book as possible if anyone can turn into flash that lets you turn the pages like a book that'd be AWESOME
I really hope I get in now. *Crosses fingers*
shrink him down and put him in her pocket to keep him safe, but that was, she knew, totally
LOVELY big sisterly imagery. Very impractical for a fighter. >_> Clothing is the most likely thing to be hit in melee or ranged combat; placing a valuable object in the way of the Dread Lord isn't smart. |D NOT that I took her seriously, mind you. :3
Wonderful story, and I'm greatly envious of your abilities in writing and in art. ;3 But good luck, my friend. ^_^ You'd be a fuuun entry to follow. <3
Thanks so much it's going to be pretty tough to wait till may now, but next week I've got a lot of stuff to do, and then there's only a couple of days till april when I can try script frenzy to take my mind of things