Confusingly titled audition round ahoy!
Thanks to Betas
and also to Jezebellydancer and GSPCrocks who also took a look at things for me. You all helped loads and the entry is much much stronger for it.
I'd like to apologise for the judges for writing an audition round that is this long! I doubt the rounds will be any longer if that helps (it probably doesn't) but there was a reason I wanted to get this done early so people had plenty of time for it.
I recommend reading his with your PDF viewer set to "two pages" so it looks as much like a book as possible if anyone can turn into flash that lets you turn the pages like a book that'd be AWESOME
I really hope I get in now. *Crosses fingers*